Composed 5/12/16
Description: For Day 8, which is “pleasure.” We were encouraged to use anaphora or epistrophe (repetition at the beginning or end of a verse). I chose to go with the former.
A quiet night is all you need
To reap the fruits of pleasure’s seed
A calmness sets into the breath
As exhales send our stress to death
A quiet night is all you need
To let all discomfort bleed
From the bones and from the mind
As you claim your own free time
A quiet night is all you need
To take that little bit of greed
For yourself and for your loves
To connect within, connect above
A quiet night is all you need
For true pleasure is just being free
So grasp to free time when it comes
And savor it until it’s done
Very well written! A Quiet Night is indeed we all need :)
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